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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

I know this is definitely one of your older stories, but I was just looking for something short (but not a one-shot) to read and came across this :P I really liked this - Marauders is always one of my favourite eras and I just really liked your writing in this. It was really great and made it super enjoyable to read. I liked Eleanor - her character is quite different to the typical girls Sirius would usually go out with.

I must admit I was pretty slow and didn't really pick up on any hints until I got to James and Peter's conversation with Eleanor, but I did like the ending! :) Although at the beginning I was kind of rooting for Sirius/Eleanor to work, I think the way you ended up was definitely better! Anyway, this was an enjoyable story to read, and I really hope I have time to read other things of yours, especially your newer stories! :)

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad that you stopped by to read this story! It's nice to write something short, but that isn't a one-shot, too - long stories can be just so tiring sometimes, not to mention hard to keep up (and it's the same for readers - I always lose a tonne by the time I finish writing a novel). It's fantastic to hear that you enjoyed this story, though - I really appreciate the compliment! ^_^

The hints are pretty subtle and many of them just sound like those rumours that go about high schools regarding over-close friendships. The focus on Eleanor's thoughts throughout this story makes it a lot harder to pick up on the hints, too. It was wonderful to end a Marauder-era story with Peter in a positive position, and I'm happy that you liked the ending. It certainly shocked some people when I first posted it. XD

Thanks again! I hope that you enjoy the newer stories as much as you did this one. :D


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