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Review:Alopex says:
Perhaps the best way I can describe this story is to say it is really grown-up. Not in the "Oooh, we're sooo mature, look at us doing mature things in the Head Boy/Girl dorm" way, obviously, but in the way that this is a "real" story about real, grown-ups doing real, grown-up things. (I know what I mean in my head.)

I really enjoyed getting to read about the aftermath of the Ministry break-in (which is one of my favorite parts of DH) from a different perspective. I've always wondered what happened to the Cattermoles, how they got away, did they come back, etc. It was nice to see in this chapter that they have found refuge at least for a moment, and that Molly and Arthur managed to figure out that Ron had been at the Ministry with Harry and Hermione.

It was just a nice chapter. I was impressed and drawn in while reading it, and I feel like there's something profound I could say about it if only I could kick my brain into gear. :P Well done!

Author's Response: It is a grown-up sort of story. Not like "mature" on the archive haha, but just mature subjects. Grown-ups, like you said. I know just what you mean.

I always wondered whether the Cattermoles got away - hated to think of them getting captured and put in Azkaban after the whole Ministry break-in brouhaha. Would've been such a shame. They dovetailed nicely with the plot I had going here, so I used them. I liked giving Molly and Arthur a little ray of hope, realizing Ron had been at the Ministry and was alive and okay.

Hey these are great reviews for so late at night! I really appreciate them :) Thank you so much!


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