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Review:Alopex says:
At this time of night, I usually have a hard time thinking of things to say about a story, so excuse this review for not being as rambly as they often are (or who knows, maybe I will think of tons to say after all) and also less coherent.

First off, I can't believe I haven't read this before. I swear I thought I had, and it was ticked off on my mental checklist, but I've never left reviews on it, nor do I have any recollection whatsoever of the contents of this chapter. Anyway. That's not really relevant.

Hattie has become quite an interesting character since you first wrote about her in TUMP. She comes across as real, you know? She's got her little quirks and worries and prejudices, and her mood isn't always perfect, and so on. I liked reading about her here, and seeing that she's decided to take a more active role in the fight against Voldemort, even if her motives are different than someone like Arthur.

Also, I'm assuming it's Reg Cattermole's family they're going to be hiding. That's an interesting tie to canon. I wonder what the next chapter is going to bring!

Author's Response: I thought you had read it too, but evidently not! I haven't seen a review from you on the latest Unsinkable-universe one-shot, either. Dying to know what you think of that one.

Anyway, I think Hattie is more fully fleshed out at this point, but she is also older at this point, and a mom and wife and now a big tragedy. That all makes you grow and change somewhat. I'm quite fond of Hattie, so I really enjoyed the chance to write a short story from her point of view.

It is the Cattermoles, yes. I love a canon tie-in or reference. :) Thanks so much for reviewing!


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