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Review:Akussa says:
Hi! Oh I remember I read the first two chapters of this story a long while ago and forgot about it. As soon as I started the first chapter again though, it all came back and I remember how much I enjoyed this.

This chapter did not disapoint and I absolutly loved the meeting with Tonks and Charlie (Bill as well but Tonks was the best). You really did a great job capturing the characters and representing them as children.

Phoebe is a good character. There isn't much too mysterious about her so far, aside from her heritage, and I like it like that. You aren't putting to much emphasis on that (for example the Sorting hat didn't reference it) and so it doesn't become cliché; good job.

I didn't spot any spelling errors so great work there. I really liked the flow of this chapter; you managed to make the usual train ride interesting and original although I found it a bit strange that Bill would spend the entire ride with his little brother (I would have expected him to join his friends at some point). Great job!

Author's Response: It is really great to know that despite it being nearly a year since you read & reviewed this story you remember how much you enjoyed this! Haha Im so glad you liked meeting the way we met Tonks because although it was the hardest part to write it was the best part! I like Phoebe she seems, normal I think. Not too grown up to fully accept the wizarding world but not immature. She doesnt think shes anything special but no one has really seen that potential in her that we might see later on. I think that we need to meet Phoebe first and her thoughts, not everyone elses. You can thank my amazing beta for the lack of spelling errors, she is pretty good! I think I read back and agree that if I was Bill I would have left him but I want to think that Bill really wants to look after his brother like his mum says and making friends isnt something you want to mess up.

Thanks again!
Bex :)

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