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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Yay! I'm so happy at how good this story is. It's rare to find a humour/romance novel that progresses fantastically every chapter and where each chapter is enjoyable to read! I just loved all the humour and action in this yet again. The plot and the characters! I love the Potter relationship here - usually James and Al are good friends or at the very least only a bit apart, but not like how you portray them - fighting like siblings do - so i like that!

It was surprising to find out both June and James were using each other, but I thought that was a great idea! The restaurant scene was pretty intense but hilarious. and the nickname you gave to Blair.. QuaffleB… (12+? :P) was funny as well.

A small part of me kind of wants this to be a james/june story now :P but I can't wait to see how Al/June is going to happen because it's clear they both still have feelings for each other even if it's not clear to to the other at all! And the POV change was quite obvious to me, so again, a wonderful chapter!! :)

I generally don't leave such long reviews for every chapter of a novel but.. I just had to let you know just how great I think this novel is, fantastically written! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Having siblings, I knew it would be unrealistic for the brothers to get along all the time. They love each other of course, but they need some brotherly fights every once in a while.

Yeah, sadly those too were being a bit immature and using each other, but they didn't mean any harm by it! Oh Blair haha, glad you found her nickname funny.

James and June are really fun to write together, but June's heart is set on the other Potter whether she likes it or not haha. And I'm happy to hear the change was obvious! I like to throw in a different pov every once in awhile to keep things interesting.

Your reviews are absolutely lovely! I'm flattered that you're liking the story so much :D Thanks again!

Ronsgirl29


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