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Review:maskedmuggle says:
I really enjoyed this chapter - especially all the action with Hermione following Draco into the Room of Requirement. I loved that apple bit, especially how Draco kind of gives it to her! And I really liked their conversation and Hermione's realisation that he was changing "though at the moment I wasnít sure whether the change would be for good or bad."

All in all, I feel like this was a better chapter than the others, and that from here it seems to be getting more interesting with more interaction and development in plot and character. I think that this is a well written story so far - but sometimes it sounds like a retelling of canon and I personally think that a bit more could be done to make it more interesting and engaging. But it's great so far :)

Author's Response: Oh yay! thank you so much for this wonderful review! I'm so glad you really liked this chapter! I'm trying very hard to keep it canon so in ways it will be a retelling so to speak but not at the same time! I'm really glad you are enjoying this! I'm currently working on chapter nine and hope to have it up by the end of the month! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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