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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello there! So here I am, after days of being such a slack, I am so sorry about that.

This is one of the most fantastic chapters I have ever read, I know out of 90+ reviews many people would've told you that, but its just too wonderful.

I loved the way you gave us a lot of background information about Amelie and her parents. At the start I thought she was a rich muggle, but then things did seem a bit off so I just registered that she was a pureblood.

Amelie's mother is a nasty woman, so is the rest of the family. No one even came up to her and comforted her, she had to comfort herself! What kind of family lets an eight-year-old do that? I think of her as the kind of mother Bellatrix would be, just on another higher level.

I'm very intrigue on how Amelie's dad became a blood traitor and what he did, though I wasn't surprised. The way Amelie described him...I kinda had doubts that he was going to be a nasty pureblood.

Anywho, I don't think you should worry too much about the chapter. The story is nicely written, the chapter is well-done and I loved every single bit of it! 10/10

Ta,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hello! Nice to have you round :) Haha.

I am so glad you enjoy it! Yes it does seem that my first chapter has been very well-loved. I'm glad that you enjoyed it too as well, and have joined the glorious hate fest we have against Amelie's Mum. It's more my later chapters that I'm worried about, because the story has been written in stops and starts and my final chapters have very few reviews. I understand the story is long and probably will tire you before you get to the end, but feel free to read on and let me know what you think of the last few chapters as well. Would love to hear from you :)
joojoo
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