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Review:maskedmuggle says:
I actually liked this chapter more than the last two, because you finally added in some Dramione interaction, and because that scene was also something new and interesting. I liked how Hermione was so out of it that she didn't even realise her shoes were making that sound, and Draco was very realistic.

I was surprised by how lonely you portrayed Hermione to be, even without Ron and Harry she has friends like Neville, Ginny, and Luna - so it was good to see her get in the same carriage as them, but I would have loved to see some interesting conversation going.

I liked how Hermione's parents surprised her with the trip to Dublin - that sounds so awesome, but the way you jumped from that to being back at the platform was just too fast and abrupt for me. Maybe it would have been better to start school again in the next chapter? Still, I did like this chapter :)

Author's Response: Yes I suddenly decided that Hermione would follow him and around and I'm so glad that people are really enjoying that bit! yeah It might have been a bit abrupt but I couldn't figure out another way to do this without making it seem that way. i'm glad you liked the chapter though!

~Slytherinchica08~


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