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Review:Renfair says:
So, a serious chapter? Serious serious? Or ironically funny serious? Or perhaps just Sirius serious? :)

Teddy is totally a stalker. He should embrace it and not make so many excuses. :)

"I was worried for what Lysander's visit would do to the vase" (case...unless Teddy is just worried if he'll break a knick-knack or something. Haha. Sorry. Typos are fun sometimes!). But Teddy's worries are definitely legitimate. I'm getting all worried now. I really just see this heading in a direction where it all hits the fan, and Teddy's, of course, going to end up taking the fall for it and hurting Rose in the process. Teddy can't even do damage control and tell Sanny to beat it since he should be all happy for different companionship being "Scorpius" and all.

"I blasted some smooth jazz music" --this just makes me laugh for some reason. Yeah, Scorpius, you're SO HARDCORE blasting your SMOOTH JAZZ! The racket these kids listen to nowadays, huh? If Teddy was ever unconsciously hoping Rose would decide to start snogging Scorpius again, then that's definitely not the right way to go about it ;)

"There was a mutual understanding the three of us shared together with that nod, and I moved along." --Well thank goodness Hermione and Percy know how to behave in a criminal investigation. Harry and Ron make me just want to smack them, but that's fitting since they always did stupid, smack-worthy things in the original books as well.

Hahaha...manly hug. I love guys and their manly hugs.

"I know you're temptin Ron and I..." (tempting? Unless Harry admires Hagrid so much he wants to talk like him :D Understandable. Hagrid is the man. I bet he gives a mean manly hug.)

"my mind was blurting the F-bomb all over the place." Oh man, that was SO me yesterday! I don't swear normally, but something happened (not serious, just darn inconvenient) that had me doing that all afternoon. One of those annoying things to arise that kept me from reviewing this week. UGH!!! F!!) But unfortunately for Teddy, you don't really have to be "qualified" to be a witness. Either side can call whoever they want whenever they want. But geez, some warning would have been nice for the poor guy!

Oh boy, this isn't looking good for anyone involved in the case. It's making me wonder, since we're assuming Rose and Scorpius are innocent, is ANYONE actually out there looking for another perpetrator? Or is everybody just paying attention to Quidditch?? Once again, the wizarding world scares the bejesus out of me. :) Nice chapter! It will be interesting to see where things go from here. ~Renny

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