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Review:CambAngst says:
This chapter was really captivating. I loved all of your descriptions. They were so rich with detail and nuance. The near-kiss between Harry and Hermione was electrifying to read.

This chapter only made me more suspicious of Angel and his true intentions. The way that he's trying so hard to steer her towards Harry is probably the biggest tip. May I speculate wildly for a moment? Thanks! I'm suspecting that Angel is actually out to get Harry. Whether he's some sort of Death Eater or some lingering bit of Voldemort's soul, I have no idea. But he seems determined to get Hermione together with Harry, and since I don't trust him I can only assume that he's doing this to cause either or both of them harm. He's already shown that he is willing to put Hermione in danger to achieve his ends and that he's willing to manipulate her emotionally. OK, I'm done speculating. It's on the record. Can't wait to see whether I'm right or not...

So you've taken Ron completely out of the picture, at least for the time being? That certainly clears the way, and Angel seems to perhaps know something about it.

I can't say enough about the private encounter between Harry and Hermione. I've read a fair bit of your writing, and I think it's the single most engrossing thing of yours that I've read. I just felt lost in the moment. It was so easy to put myself in either of their positions, and relate to the energy and the awkwardness that they were feeling. It was really neat to hear Harry say those things to Hermione, since I don't think it could ever happen in a canon story.

And then they both comes to their senses and remember Ginny. It's nice to see that neither one of them has completely succumbed to what Angel is planning. Hermione's feelings about Angel (Hermione couldn’t push away that feeling that he was mad at her, or at least surprised, as if something unexpected had happened) only reinforce my suspicions.

So I don't know. Maybe Angel turns out to be this really great guy by the end of the story and boy, am I going to feel silly. But for now, I'm thinking there's way more than meets the eye here. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review. I enjoy reading each of your reviews. They remind me of the kind of reviews I leave you where I speculate on who the dark lady is and what I think will happen next. It is nice to know that I have captivated your attention so much. I am also glad that you liked the Hermione and Harry scene, I was worried that it might have moved too quickly.
I hope to have chapter 5 in the queue before the end of the weekend, so it should be up for view by next week at the latest.

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