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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Eee I loved this chapter! I love how you still manage to have surprises in this - I was actually pretty surprised when you revealed that Malfoy had been crying! and that definitely piques my interest and gets me wanting to know more! And I also like how so far both Malfoy and Hermione are still quite canon - especially with Malfoy insulting Hermione like that, it made it more realistically Malfoy. I liked all of Hermione's thoughts and reflections, as well as the small interaction with Harry, and in general, a nicely written chapter :) So far the story is moving along well! :D

Author's Response: Yes Malfoy crying is quite a surprise but as he does it in the series I've just added it in a bit sooner than what we see. I'm trying my hardest to keep this canon and you saying that I have kept them canon makes me so happy! thank you so much for reading and reviewing!


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