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Review:unbalanced says:
This is a lovely start to what seems like an interesting story! Your summary drew me in, and the chapters that you do have maintained that interest really well!

One thing I'd watch out for though, and something that I noticed mainly in your first chapter is that you tend to start the majority of your paragraphs with either 'Theo' or 'Theodore'. I find, and it may just be a personal opinion that it detracted from the flow of the story a bit and that perhaps you could have found another way to start paragraphs.

Overall though, it was definitely interesting, and I'll be keeping a look out for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy and continue to read. :)

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