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Review:Moonyxluna says:
YES!! The whole time I was reading this chapter I was soo hoping that would happen.

I love them together. So.. you may know I kinda love happy endings... Just to let you know I'm already waiting for the wedding bells.

I just love the "best friends didn't realize what was right in front of them" types and.. well this was a pretty literal interpretation of that :D

They were holding hands! and I love the way she makes fun of his hair and calls him bird names. I was laughing whenever they talked to eachother, they just work so well together.

-- backing away from Lucy who was jumping around in excitement, her hands grasping the Timeturner in her hands as though it were the purest gold made to man-- this sentance was worded weird. If you go back and edit I think you should take out the first 'her hands'. just so you know :)

I wonder what future Lucy and Steven are thinking as they snog in front of their past selves. (I'm going to get really confusing here) because... I mean they are in the future, so the future Lucy and Steven would have already gone in the past and seen this, so they would know that their past selves are watching them.

okay.. I'm going to stop thinking now and wait for the next chapter where all my questions will probably be answered.

If you couldn't tell I loved this. How many chapters do you think this will be?

Author's Response: Hello there love! Haha I'm so glad that you were hoping that, I think they'd make a really fun boyfriend and girlfriend eventually.
I know you do and I see this being an entirely fun story so there will be a happy ending just not sure what the ending is going to be yet :-D Haha hopefully there will be a wedding :-D
I love that too! I can't wait until they notice they fancy each other, after seeing each other kiss they're going to notice each other a lot more, I can't wait to write more hehe.
I was thinking that too hun! after I put it in the queue haha this is why I need to double check everything, thank you for pointing it out to me, I will go back and edit it at some point.
I have no idea yet, I reckon they're going to see each other or just not remember it as they're both so caught up in kissing.
Haha I shall be writing the next chapter today I think? They hopefully will be if the characters don't take me in a different direction :-D
I have no clue probably about twenty? Thanks for the review hun!!! You always make my day so much brighter :-D

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