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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
I really liked this little one shot a lot. Specifically how you've organized it with the italicized word to begin each paragraph. I felt like it was the italics that really drove the message home. I also like how you don't tell us who the characters are. They could be anyone from an OC to some cannon characters. But not knowing completed the overall feel of the story. I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes either so thats good. I would recomend that you fix the spacing a little. Stories just look more apppealing when there isn't a huge gap between each paragraph. Any way this was great, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!!!

I don't know where the idea for the italicized words came from. I feel like I've read something else that was a similar style, but I'm not sure. I"m glad it works!!!

I wanted to keep a lot of this ambiguous. The characters especially. I wanted you to be able to imagine whichever characters YOU wanted in this. I also didn't want to bother with characterization and too much physical description. I wanted this to be more emotions driven, that's why there isn't any dialogue.

I tried so many times to fix the spacing. I don't know what it is but every time I copy and paste my story into the editor it adds a lot of space and I take the spaces out and they just show back up again. :/ I'll have to ask around and see if there is a way to fix that. Hopefully it's just me being technically challenged and it's just something simple I'm doing wrong.

Thanks so so so much for reviewing.


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