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Review:Elenia says:
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Your plot is interesting, I love stories about George, especially when he's trying to accept the fact that Fred isn't around anymore. Those kind of stories are so emotional.

And yours didn't disappoint me one bit on that area. This was really sad and beautifully written. A very strong first chapter which made me want to read more. Oh, and I loved your descriptions, they were all so detailed and just captivating!

I was surprised to see Hannah wandering in there. I would've wanted to know a bit more about why she happened to be there, but I'm suspecting that maybe you're saving that for a later chapter.

Anyways, great job! Hopefully I'll get the chance to read more once you update (:

~Elenia

Author's Response: Hi! :)

I'm so glad you liked it! Emotion is probably one of the hardest things to write in my opinion, so I'm so pleased you thought it was okay in this. Yes, Hannah's sudden appearance will be explained in the next chapter!

I plan to update fairly soon so keep your eyes peeled! Thanks for reviewing! :D


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