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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh this story just makes me want to read and write some Snape/Lily which I do plan to do somewhere down the lines but this was just so darn sweet and innocent and I just loved it to pieces! As always Jane you tell an absoolutely wonderful story with just the perfect touch of description and oh gush! I will forever be in awe of your writing and will forever be reading it thats for sure! I loved how the story dealt with how Snape has never had a real Christmas and Lily staying true to her character gives him a gift that means so much to her.

That little bit at the end though is just so darn heartwrentching to think of him sitting in front of the fireplace or something curled up reading this book that she had given him years ago even though she has already passed on from the physical world. I thought that it did a wonderful job of showing his love for her over the years without having to go into the detail of it!

Characterization for this is just wonderful! Lily has that headstrong, if she wants to do something shes going to do it no matter what. Even Snape was wonderful with his feelings towards Lily and actions towards not having his own Christmas ever! I loved the bit where she always has to shake his hand after making a deal as if a hand shake means you can't break the promise or deal.

Ok well I could go on for ages about just how much I love your Snape/Lily and how it makes me want to write my own but I shall stop it here! So Great Job as always and i really enjoyed this piece.. yeah as a matter of fact its going to be favorited!


Author's Response: Let me know whenever you write your Snape/Lily! ♥ I'm a massive fan of this pairing -- but only written in canon, so basically, one pining for the other. Which I guess is strange, but I am who I am. :)

I LOVE the end, if I can say so! I do think that it's something Snape would do, to read a book every year just because Lily gave it to him. (I did happen to pick P&P because of Hannah, but it fit well, I think.) And I'm so glad you liked the characterization, too! It is something I work hard on, in every story, because no character should ever be like another. (Stepping off high horse now.)

♥ I cannot even begin to thank you enough for leaving me all these lovely reviews. You seriously made my day, and then some -- I'm so amazed you were willing to come and do this! You're fabulous, Erica. :3

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