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Review:charlottetrips says:
That was surprisingly sweet taking into the fact that it has Pansy in it, who is quite honestly one of my least favorite people. I like how you were able to slip in an arc of their friendship. Also Daphne's love was clear without necessarily spelling it all out in one go. Just simple actions and lines and it effectively told me how she felt.

The ending was sweet and simple and I actually felt like "Yay, they found their happy ending!"

Sorry this is shorter than usual I am just on my iPad and it isn't entirely a comfortable typing :/

But I liked this as I always like your writing, Amanda!


Author's Response: Hi Char! Thanks for coming by, and I'm sorry that this response has taken so long. School totally ate my life in April, and I'm only just now catching up. I hope it's not too off-putting.

Pansy definitely isn't a popular character, and I used to make this joke out of her because I didn't like her either, so it was neat to be able to twist her into a semi-likable, normal girl. I wanted things to feel very simple and innocent, so that by the time you got to the end, it would just make sense for them to fall in love. I'm glad it worked that way for you.

Thanks so much for your kind review! :)


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