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Review:Sebastian Alfayalfa says:
Hey!
Okay, so. I think that you did a really fantastic job portraying David's character, and I like how Val is developing as a character. I love how she's ACTUALLY starting to think more about James, and this chapter was just over all really great as always..! Anyways, keep up the great work, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Seriously, I am! I think it's kind of hilarious how I check out harrypotterfanfiction almost EVERY SINGLE DAY!- JUST to see if you have updated any more chapters! I guess that just shows how good of a writer you are! At first when I started reading this chapter, I was sort of surprised, because, to be honest, I thought that Val was going to do something more dramatic (I don't really know what, but maybe something like talking to Joy's ghost or something), but having read this chapter I think that you couldn't have done a better job! It's simple, but so Pure (I can't think of any other word for it, sorry!) Anyways, keep up the GREAT work and update REALLY SOON or ELSE!!! (just kidding!) ;D
Your #1 Fan,
Sebastian Alfayalfa

Author's Response: I know I've said this before, but I love your reviews :) They just make me feel all warm and happy inside. I'm glad you liked this chapter. I wanted to kind of set it up to be a bit of a dramatic cliffhanger, keep you wondering what she's doing, even throughout James' chapter. And then, after the buildup in your mind, have the actual plan just be simple and, as you said, pure.

Thanks for the review. You rock. Seriously. I love you for your reviews.

-Laura

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