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Review:SiriuslyPeeved says:
I love the dark humor in this chapter, and the mixture of tragedy and absurd comedy has me giggling one moment and sighing the next.

"Draped lazily" is a great use of an adverb... definitely enhances the dark humor of the chapter!

"Mercifully, he was not here at the moment, for when he was, Hermione could smell his foul breath and could feel his eyes staring at her every movement twenty-five percent of the time..."

Rolling around laughing! I love Hermione, she is so in character, too often in fanfic she gets portrayed as overly prissy when she has a salty and frank sense of humor.

As far as mechanical notes, the capitalization and formatting seem to need a little bit of attention -- Auror (as in the Auror office) is capitalized as is Floo. I believe spoken spells in use should be italicized. There, you asked for CC! :)

I am dying of giggles at the idea of Harry as a zombie, however did you come up with this twisted and wonderful idea?! I enjoyed this so much!

Author's Response: Ahh! You're right about the capitalization, I should get on that!
Isn't the thought of Harry as a zombie hysterical? I think it was because I was talking to a couple of teenage boys and it just kind of jumped out at me! And it's something that I absolutely adore writing too. It's so much fun!

i think Hermione is my favorite person to write about, I love writing from her point of view and I'm glad you think she's in chracter! That's always a worry of mine, so it's great to hear!

I think the other chapters get a little darker, but I try to maintain some subtle humor throughout it...just because it concept is absolutely ridiculous so it's hard not too!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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