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Review:CharlieDay says:
This story certainly has good potential and is a very interesting concept, however, it could be viewed by some as slightly cliche. The whole 'my name is' introduction is quite commonly used, not to say it's bad, it's a very effective technique, however it is as I said, not particularly unusual.

Other than that, this was very fun, and I'm excited to see where you are going with this! I'll definitely be looking out for future chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you for your input! I'm not the best when it comes to introductions, I think I'm much better at writing after the main character is established. I'm excited for this story as well! Thanks for reading, and I'll post the next chapter as soon as It's done!


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