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Review:MercyWaters says:
Wow. This is absolutely phenomenal.

I've never read a fic centered on Lavender, as I've always found her to be unimportant and a bit annoying, but you did an excellent job on this. You gave me a new perspective on her. Your wording is fabulous and sounds so poetic and beautiful, my favorite line was "One day the boys will adore you and your figure will curve the right way instead of wrong and you will be someone special."

That just struck me--it sounded so beautiful, yet so painful. It speaks of loneliness and not feeling good enough, something I feel most of us can relate to. The voice you gave Lavender was excellent, and I love how you've written this in the second person. It's difficult to find second person in general, yet alone one written as beautifully as this. I also liked how you didn't reveal to us who the narrator was until the very last line. It leaves the reader in suspense and draws them in, wanting to know more.

This is definitely going in my favorites. It's short and sweet, yet amazing. Lovely job, and keep writing.

Bri, xx

Author's Response: Ahh, I'm so glad you like it ^__^ I love that I've been able to change so many people's views on Lavender, especially because it wasn't my intention, and it surprised me! I just sort of wrote her as how she seemed in my head.

I love that you love that line! It's very teen Lavender to me. I think that's what she'll always want, some part of her, but at the end, she'll okay if she doesn't get that. There's plenty more to want in the world. When I wrote this, I was able to see how Lavender had hopes like everyone else and overall, it's just to be loved.

♥ thank you so so much for the review :3


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