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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Well I must say that I really liked this chapter.

I enjoyed reading about little Amelie. I thought she was a great character and I can't wait to see how she grows into her older character from here on out. I loved all of the emotion you brought through in this chapter with her. She is a force to be reckoned with and I love how she is trying to change from being the ice queen to the person she really wants to be. I really love how witty she is!

I also liked how you introduced the Marauders...they are quite the handful of a bunch. You did a great job with it and I found it totally believable that they would do something like that. It is almost like they thrive on it. I am glad that she is friends with Lily. I also liked how you included the difference in wording like muggle and Lily asking who? =)

I thought that the flow and pace of the chapter were both smooth and well balanced together. I didn't get the impression that I was being rushed through it at all. I thought you did a wonderful job with description. I didn't see anything else that jumped out typo wise or weirdly worded sentence wise.

Overall, I thought you did a wonderful job holding my attention and I am excited to see what else happens as the story continues and I am excited to see what house Amelie gets sorted into!

Keep up the great work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Hey!

Once again, thank you for the amazing review! Amelie and her story took up a large part of my mid-late teens so it's always amazing to find people who are still so appreciative of the effort that went into her.
Of course, the Marauders had to be introduced with a bang ;)
Thanks again for taking the time to give your opinions on all the different sections of the story so far. Means so much!
x


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