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Review:RozeDelImperator says:
I have to say, I am very impressed. Your banner intrigued me, so I thought I'd give your story a shot, and I'm sooo glad I did. I haven't really encountered very many stories about Bill and Fleur's family, and I'm very happy I found yours (it's definitely going into my favorites) it was amazing. Your writing is incredible, it's not too descriptive, nor too vague. You used the exact right amount to paint a beautiful image in my mind without overwhelming me with too much detail. I read this three times, and each time it only got better. I really wasn't expecting the ending with Lysander being the one alive and Dominique the one dead, but it actually worked really well and touched my heart. So many little details through out the entire piece hinted at it, but I didn't get it until the very end, which made it soo much better that way. I absolutely adore this piece, and I'm definitely going to read more of your work. Why would you ever dream of burying your work for woodlice? You're incredible! This is amazing just as a one-shot, and I would love to see what you could do with a longer story. :) I especially love the ending where you had the bit:

"He promised her the world, once.

He never expected her to become it."

That part was my absolute favorite. Totally loved it! You definitely should keep writing! You've got real talent, and you make me super jealous! Please, don't stop writing, you're awesome! :D

~Roze Del Imperator

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely review! I'm sorry it's taken so long to reply. I'm drowning in exam revision at the minute so I've not had time to sit and spend time replying to my reviews.

I can't even tell you how much I appreciate your comments on my description. I do wonder sometimes if there's too much going on in it for people to get their head around so when somebody says what you've just said, it really puts my mind at ease and makes me feel quite proud of it.

I'm really glad that you understood the story, actually; that was another worry I had. This was quite clear to me (the plot changed a few times in the course of writing it) but whether that would come across to the reader, I wasn't sure. I wanted you to get to the end, go 'erm, okay', read it back and then understand. It apparently works!

Haha, I'm quite picky about which of my stories go up, especially if I've spent a long time on them (some of my better stories, in my opinion, are the ones I wrote in a short space of time). Sadly my ability to write like this doesn't seem to stretch to my longer writing but I'm working on that!

So happy that you pointed that line out - I really like it and I spent some time getting it right.

Thank you so, so much for such a lovely review. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it!

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