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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
Cruise ship! Smuggling! Mystery! Percy as the hero! Your summary already made me ridiculously excited. What great ingredients for a story and I really love a sort of adventure mystery story!

I decided to take a peak at your page as a sort of thanks for taking the time to review LittlePaddocks630pm :P And like I said I was happy to find this story. And the summary wasn't just empty promises. You've got a great start here. I love how you've put thought in the ship yards and how everything works there. Oh do you mean Southampton by the way, or is it supposed to be South Hampton, like it is?

Percy is so Percy in this story. Though it's so sad Audrey has died. :( But he is a bit work obsessed and has obviously taken his refuge there after her death and has everything well organized, but you still have him as a friendly and polite person, like he's supposed to be. :) I'll be continuing my reading of this story!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm amazed you found the summary interesting, and I think it's almost snooze-worthy. I suspect "biannual licensing renewals" don't bring in droves of readers! :P

I'm actually a slight bit embarassed each time I receive reviews on this story, as I'm planning rather substantial edits. This is the story, by the way, that I'm supposed to write a new chapter for for your challenge. But anyway, the main elements are staying the same, but I think I've plugged some plot holes and whatnot, if I ever bring myself to posting the edits.

Er, I do mean Southampton. I asked once in a status update or something for names of actual British port cities and chose one of the responses without checking a map. Oops.

In this story, Percy is meant to be 62, so Audrey didn't die tragically young. She didn't live to old age either, though. Anyway, I have a soft spot for Percy, and I really am working at trying to do him justice as a character. I'm glad you enjoyed him. :)

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