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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Aww! Alex is such a lovely boy! What did go wrong between James and Jo? (I think we need a ship name for this couple...no?) The two of them together would've been the perfect parents for Alex. Bejeezles.

I think Jo not telling James about Alex now is something that is right. Alex seems like a very bright kid and nothing passes his eye, so James sneaking off with bimbos and having an all-drunk lifestyle would do nothing, but crush his heart. But if Jo told him about Alex much sooner then maybe things could've been different.but James made it high and clear that he didn't want anymore to do with her, so Jo was on the right side...but Alex...

Gah! Its just so complicated! Thankfully, I am not studying law! How is the judge feeling about this? Is his mental state as deteriorated as mine from reasoning which of the two is more right? Both of them are wrong. The judge should just adopt Alex ad everyone can be happy about it! Great compromise, huh?

I love your story, every single bit of it. Its just a crazy mess waiting to be untangled. Lovely story! Amazing author!
Ta,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: If you like Alex, you're going to love the next few chapters.

The big reveal about what happened won't happen until chapter eight although there are some pretty good clues coming up so you MAY be able to guess by then. It's not something I can just throw out without going into the compleat story. If I do, I fear some people would be content just hearing one side of it.

I see the judge as a fat snooty old man who only likes to judge others lives because he thinks he's better then them (Not that that had any relevance to the story). Alex is a good kid but he is partially his father's son and so I have a feeling that if the judge tried to take him away from his family, Alex would make his life a living heck.


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