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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello there!

I really like your story so far! I love the way you introduce the chapters and tell the events that had occurred with the transcripts of the case. A very creative way! :D

I love Johanna, so far, I like her character and James makes her sound like a real beach. (I spelt it that way so the mods don't get mad.) However, I think its very unfair that she hid their son from him. Though she clearly says that she didn't actually hide the kid from him...but she did! She didn't say anything about it to James, so in my opinion she was SO hiding Alex from James.

I am enjoying the story so far, and I am very glad that you are updating constantly! I do hope you remain consistent! :D

You're a great author,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I was a bit apprehensive about the transcripts but i figured it was a nice way to introduce who is talking resorting to having a sign at the top (you may or may not have noticed but whoever is talking in the transcripts besides the lawyers is who is talking in the chapter).

James has to see her as a beach for his own good. He doesn't want to get hurt again.

What you'll see with both characters is that their main fault is their pride. Jo firmly believed that there were some things you don't say in a letter--that you should say face to face (like how you shouldn't break up with someone in a text). So when he refused to answer her, Jo thought she was in a no win situation and left the ball in his court.

As for James not replying--wait for the big reveal of what happened in chapter 8--but I needed all the fault not to fall on Jo. It was her fault they broke up, but it was his that they never got back together.

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