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Review:MercyWaters says:
This is definitely an intriguing start to a story! You've set up an interesting, unique premise and already you have me wanting to know more. I like how you've characterized Lily, and of course the humor is always appreciated. :) The beginning was very good, you caught my attention and pulled me right into the story because I was curious about what in the world was going on!

I was emotionally invested while reading as well--I couldn't even comprehend why she would go off and sell the Marauder's Map! It horrified me, haha. But I'm a bit confused...why in the world would she be expelled for that? I don't understand why that would even get her into trouble honestly, it's her property and all isn't it? Why would she be prohibited to sell it? I know Filch wasn't too fond of the map, but all he did was confiscate it if I remember correctly. I'm just a bit confused about that fact.

Overall I like this start. :) I'm interested to know what happens next!

Bri, xx

Author's Response: Hia! Thanks for the lovely review. It took me ages trying to find my perfect Lily for this story, and so that made me squee :P

Oh dear, I hope you weren't too confused!! Stupidly, I actually have a really good reason for why she was expelled for it, but forgot to add it to the chapter. Thanks for reminding me! I'll be able to edit :)

Thanks Bri!! :)

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