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Review:Elenia says:
Why haven't I read your stories before? I'm really trying to rack my brains and ask myself that. Oh well, I'm really glad I got the chance now because this was another wonderful story!

I really liked the whole idea of this story. It showed that there's still hope even during darker times. And I think the story fit really well to the lyrics!

You did a good job on Lily and James, they were both in character, and it was really cute to see her starting to realise how much he has matured, I liked that a lot.

You used descriptions well and the whole story flowed. Your dialogue also works and sounds natural. So good work!

I'll continue checking your author page because there were still more stories that caught my interest (: see you soon!

~Elenia

Author's Response: Oh you are so nice, makingme blush like crazy over here!

I'm so glad you liked this story and think it works well with the lighter lyrics. I like writting darker stories and I feel the first real confrontations of the Marauder with the first war are so important and emotionally charged. These moments changed everything; from the way they saw the world to how they saw themselves and that, is a very positive thing.

I'm not a fan of romance stories; hardly read any and can't really write it without feeling so corny it hurts so writting this little moment where they are friends and on their way to become an item is easier for me. Plus, I think it's a much lovelier moment!

I hope you will find some other pieces of interest in my list of stories because I love your reviews so much, they always make me happy :) Thanks again!

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