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Review:Elenia says:
This immediately caught my attention on your author's page! Scott Pilgrim Vs The World is one of my favourite movies too, so there was no way I would skip this ^^

And I'm really glad I didn't because I loved this! I think your writing is really good, this was a really good and interesting start for a story and made me want to read more! I just had to favourite it so you'll definitely see me back here when the next chapter is out!

I think you did a really good job with Hugo. Loved the part where he was hiding in his dorm so he wouldn't spill anything to Lily. I think that introduced us to his character really well. I can't wait to see what you have planned for all the others!

The whole idea for this story is so great and I'm anxious to see how you mix the movie's plot into the magical world! So many possibilities!

Keep up the great work! (:

~Elenia

Author's Response: Scott Pilgrim vs The World is such a great movie; I'm glad to find a fellow fan!!

Considering you know and like the movie, it makes it even more of a compliment (in my opinion) that you enjoyed this so far. I tried to write it in the spirit of the movie when it comes to the rythm and the importance to every little detail so I'm glad this worked out!

Next chapter is already in the queue and will feature the first confrontation (albeit, it won't be the best, I'm sorry.. I honestly already much prefer the second one!!) and mostly, Molly and Killian finding out about all of this!

Hugo is one of my favorite character; I've been working on a series with him (first "book" is almost done and will be sent for validation when I'm completly done with the story) so I've got a good grasp on him, I think.

You are correct, the confrontations will be different in here because it is a lot of fun to add the magical side and bring different things (although some will be completly muggle) to the story. I hope you'll enjoy what's in story and thanks so much for taking the time to review, it made my day a lot brighter!


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