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Review:orderofthephoenix says:
Sarah, you know how much I love this series and although I've not reviewed individual chapters, I thought I ought to review the last one at least. After a few years I have finally managed to read this story again! It really is a fantastic story and I enjoyed it even more when I read it through this time!

The characters are so real and I love their personalities and the way you manage to tell their stories. Albus is probably my favourite, being the protagonist. I think you gave him a great personality of his own, and Rose too. I read a lot of next gen where Al and Rose have stereotypical personalities of being very similar to their parents. In your story, Rose is very studious but she is also willing to have fun and even takes the blame for the boys a few times too (which I love). Albus is caring and kind and quite different to James who loves to be centre of attention.

I have a soft spot for Matt too, though. I liked the way you strongly hinted to the reader about his condition, but let the hints build up for the characters until eventually Rose figured it out. I really feel sorry for Matt and for what he has had to go through. Even though Amy was only present for a few scenes throughout the story, I quickly understood how much she cared for Matt and protected him. I can't imagine what she must have gone through, having her family turned upside down but I look forward to reading your stories about her.

I guessed pretty soon that it was Washburn who was performing legilimency on the Potters. I think it was during Al and James' detention when James felt all funny. I didn't expect Willinson (Sr & Jr) to be working with him though. I wonder if this plot of theirs to reunite the Hallows will continue throughout all the novels. It would be very interesting if it did.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the novels and keeping up with your WIP this time. I'm sure the next few years won't be uneventful at all for Albus. :D

-Sophia

Author's Response: Sophia! Thank you so much for all of the lovely long reviews! You are awesome. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this story.

I tried really hard not to give Al and Rose the same personalities as their parents. I'm glad you think I did it well! I like to think that Rose is a good mix of both Hermione and Ron. As for Albus, he's a bit more timid than either of his parents. Al is more like Harry and James is more like Ginny, I think.

Matt is one of my favorite characters. Amy is my absolute favorite. I'm glad you liked that I strongly hinted to the reader about Matt's condition. I've had a few people tell me I should have made it less obvious. But it was only obvious to the reader because we all know Remus's story. Albus and his friends only knew a little bit, so it took them longer.

Yeah, it was fairly obvious that it was Washburn, but the boys took a little longer to figure that out. The plot to reunite the Hallows continues through the third novel.

Again, thank you so much for the lovely review!!! You are amazing! :)

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