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Review:ewsoucf7 says:
I actually saw this challenge, and was going to enter it myself...but I didn't in the end.

I think you did a great job at including the gemstone and it's meaning. I think it was very realistic that Ron would recall what the woman had told him instead of searching for it himself, so very well done for that.

Your characters are very realistic and I don't think any of them are too OOC, though I feel as though Ron would have panicked a little more than he did. I loved Hermione in it though, screaming at him. I can imagine her doing that.

I think the flow of writing was brilliant. It was very easy and very enjoyable to read. I would have loved to have seen more chapters too, though understandably it would have been difficult to incorporate the necklace into future chapters.

I think the way you have written the story is brilliant too. The idea itself is a very sweet idea, but I think it's made sweeter by the way you've written it, especially that you included Hermione wearing the necklace while she have birth, and that was the reason that they named their daughter. I think those extra little quirks make the story very unique and very squishy!

Cannot wait to read more of your work, of which I am already a fan! Feel free to pop by and request a review from the thread or PM me. =]

Author's Response: Hi there!

Oh my goodness! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad that you enjoyed this! I was sad to find out that the challenge was closed.

I am glad to know that the gemstone worked well. I am also glad that the characters stayed true to themselves. I loved writing Hermione. That bossy attitude was so much fun to write because one minute she can be calm and sensible and the next she is the complete opposite.

Yay! I did well with the flow! I was worried that it maybe weird in the way that I wrote their love scene, but I went with the less is more rule and wasn't quite sure how it would transition between that and the nine months later. You have calmed my worries about this!

I have actually thought about ways to write other stories with the same necklace as a sequal, but if I do that it will have to wait until I am caught up on my three WIPS.

I really don't know what to say in response to this lovely compliment. I am so very happy that you thought that I did such a brillinat job with this. This has made my day!! =)

I am so happy that you're a fan of my writing!I will definitely request more reviews from you!! You've given me such much welcome insight!

-SR17


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