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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I am here with your review!

This was very cute. I loved the fluff. It wasn't overwhelming.

I thought you did a great job portraying Alice and Frank. They are both very quiet and kind people and I think that you did a wonderful job bringing that out of the both of them. Alice is very demanding of herself with her sketches. I thought that they were both unique, but also kept along the lines of the Alice and Frank that we all know and love. I also liked that he dared her. Hahahahaha what a way to go there! =)

I did notice a couple of typos. The one that stood out the most was when Alice was talking and instead of saying too she said tom. Just something to watch for. Other than that I didn't see anything major. I am not strong with grammar, but I also didn't notice anything that I know that I understand about it being off either.

I thought that the pace of this story was well done for a One-shot. I felt like you captured the moment well. Also, I really liked the ending. I thought it was sweet and gave us details about the story beyond what you wrote since we know that they get together, but I thought it was a nice touch.

Overall, this was a very well done One-shot and I love Alice and Frank. I was pleased to see how it turned out and I really love the title. It just adds to the Alice and Frank cuteness.

Keep up the great writing! =)

Author's Response: Hi!

Thank you! I'm glad I've done a good job writing fluff and that I didn't over-do it (I think I might write more fluff, it's refreshing not having to destroy my favourite characters lives :/)

Thank you! I always assumed that Neville was more like his dad then his mother so I attempted to put a bit of Neville in Frank (not sure if they came across) Thank you! Haha, dares are always good; no matter what age you are!

Typos! Oh no! I'll fix them up as soon as possible! Thank you for letting me know!

Thank you!
Jas


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