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Review:charlottetrips says:
Extremely lovely. Whatever time elapse you had on writing doesnít really show in this short but emotional piece. Truly, the descriptions and the actions and the words all flowed very smoothly and effectively. I didnít have to think about the words I was reading because it really was just a story, a moment out of time that I was reading about. It was beautiful.

I think I first knew it was Sev when you described him as very pale as he was digging the hole. Having him appear as a child seems very apt to me as he was probably happiest in his miserable little life when he and Lily were really close without Hogwarts and James, the Marauders or Voldemort. Lilyís compassion was clearly evident throughout the whole one-shot. I actually did have to go back and read the beginning part a little to really let that part sink into me.

Basically, I really liked this story. Any story that allows closure for either Lily or Sev is good for me! :)

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review. I feel the same way about Lily/Snape stories. Any closure is good closure. I pictured him as a child for the exact reason you said. His childhood may not have been a happy one, but I imagined his time with Lily before Hogwarts were some of his best days. Thank you again for the R&R. It brightened my day :)

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