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Review:hollysmith says:
Wow! Talk about everything hitting the fan. I'm with you. Nat is an idiot and Al is a jerk. So many fics on this site paint Al as the nice and humble of the two Potter boys. I think it's so refreshing to have something different. Good job on picking him to be your antagonist.

James is hurting so much. The fact that he chose to have a snogging partner and to refuse to talk about what happened with Nat, makes it obvious that he's been trying to ignore and numb the pain. Now that he told someone, other than Fred, maybe he can work through it and start to heal.

Not that James shouldn't take some of the blame here. Fav line: "Why should I have trusted you?" I asked angrily, suddenly furious that he got to sit there acting like a saint and martyr" Summer was probably saying that because she thought he was kissing Nat by the lake. But I see a double meaning there. Why should she trust him when he refused to trust her with why he broke up with Nat.

I think they need to cool off for a bit and start fresh and properly next time. No more hiding and lies. James needs to take her on a proper date; in public. He better forgive her quickly, because... because she's his lobster!!

Author's Response: indeed. pretty much everything that has happened so far went straight in the trash in this chapter ~ all the progress they had made. natalie is an enormous idiot and there is just no need for albus on the planet. thank you :) wanted to be a bit different, since there are enough cliches in this story as it is...

james is unbelievably hurt right now, which is why he reacted in the way he did. he didn't want to talk about natalie because he wanted to repress what he thought about the betrayal, and this brought it all back. hopefully now, he can heal. but he still has the summer thing to try and get over, which isn't good.

thank you for picking up on that! that's exactly right ~ it's both. yes, summer might not have deserved his trust ~ but what did he ever do to deserve hers? he didn't tell her anything, or even listen to her, most of the time. that's in the next chapter, that. :D

OH MY GOSH, FRIENDS REFERENCE?! she's his lobster... well, i can't keep them apart if she's his lobster :P

thank youuu, ellie :) xx

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