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Review:Moonyxluna says:
oh its the trouble!! errg and he's going to meet Lucy... Starting to get worried! oh my god if he's off snogging Lucy right now I'm going to be so mad at him!!

I love how she has such a fantastic relationship with her dad, it makes me miss my dad! I loved the way George and Roxanne go back and fourth about the jacket. it was really sweet!

okay.. so I overreacted a little about the Lucy and Lysander.

the sleep over was really funny! And we get to find out what happened with Lily and Lorcan! I didn't see that coming... well I thought something happened, but I just thought it was a quick kiss or a talk or something! I kinda have to agree with Lily. If Lorcan likes her, which I think he does because it seems that he's having a hard time being with Stephanie, (and who wouldn't? She's awful.) he needs to break up with her! But I get where the other girls are coming from, that she needs to relax her temper and actually talk to him about it.

lovely chapter! Firewhisky is always fun to read about!

Author's Response: Your reviews are great!!! You might have overreacted a tad bit about Lucy & Lysander, but I totally understand. It does get suspicious.

I'm glad you enjoyed George & Roxanne's converastion. I always pictured him having a close relationship to his children & Roxanne is such a daddy's girl.

I know the Lily/Lysander thing was a bit extreme and I had a hard time deciding if I wanted it to just be a kiss or not, but finally settled with the shag for reasons unknown.

Thanks for all the feedback, you make me feel tens time better about this story now! :)

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