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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Aw, Roxanne and Lysander are really perfect, aren't they? I suppose I'll have to see if some 'trouble in paradise' comes from it, won't I? It seems like you have a good set up for it, with the beginning saying how Roxanne is worried that Lysander will be studying too much to help her practice.

okay, officially shipping Lorcan/Lily. Stephanie can just go away please. I wonder if something did happen with them and that's why Stephanie is all crabby and Lily is angry. I'll just have to see :)

I liked Roxanne's little sarcastic remarks through the chapter, they were funny :) I like what you've done with her character so far, and i'm interested to read what you have planned for her as far as 'the new girl' goes along. To tell you the truth I don't read too much slash but there's always a time to start!

Really lovely chapter! moving on :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I started out really loving Roxanne and Lysander, but you might have noticed I've changed my mind a little as the story progressed. School is just a lot of pressure for young love.

Lily and Lorcan I love. They just have some issues. lol I'll let you in on a secret and tell you now that I hate Stephanie. I don't even enjoy writting her, but she does have a purpose, so unfortunately she will be sticking around.

Thanks again for the nice review!! :)


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