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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Hi! You were so lovely in going through and reviewing my story so I checked out your page to see if I could return the love. And I was in luck!

You've got a really great first chapter here! I love that you chose to write about Roxanne! She's such an underused character and I love to read stories about her. She's the kid of George, she's just got to be awesome!

The dream was really adorable! and I loved Lily-- poor Albus! I can just imagine him and Harry rushing through Diagon Alley 45 minutes before they should be at kings cross buying Albus a broom. Actually.. it sounds a lot like my insane family :p

George is like I always picture him to be as a father :) He just goes behind Angelina's back and is an awesome parent! I liked the little referance to the first book with him telling Roxanne he was waiting for a toilet seat!

I thought this was great for a first chapter. I noticed a few grammar errors but that's nothing a quick re-read or a beta couldn't fix.

great chapter, continuing on :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the amazing reviews!!! I wanted to write about a character you never hear to much about. I feel like writting a Rose or Albus story would have been to much pressure. Plus I've always been in love with Fred & George, so Roxanne just seemed to be the right choice for me. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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