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Review:ravingbumblebee says:
Beautifully written!!

I've read a lot of stories where Lucius/Narcissa aren't madly in love, that Narcissa is only with Lucius because her parents made her or because of money or whatever, that Lucius is an abusive, heartless husband/father. I, myself, have even portrayed Lucius as a heartless man, so it's really, really refreshing to see this loving, sensitive side of Lucius.

The descriptions were great, the vocabulary used was amazing. It's all just.. gorgeous writing!!

Excellent job!! :D
[10/10]

Author's Response: Thanks! I wrote this this particular way because that was how I always thought the Malfoys were- self-centred and on the wrong side. I don't think Lucius was born heartless, anyway!

I'm very glad you liked it, thanks so much for the review :D


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