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Review:RosieQueen says:
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Oh, this was such a sweet prologue! I've never read about Oliver's parents; in fact, I've never even thought about Oliver's family in general! I think you portrayed the mood of the time perfectly; Charles was rightfully protective about his wife and newborn son, what with Death Eaters prowling the streets everywhere. It was just how a prologue should be; short and mysterious.

I only noticed a minor mistake:
"Charles, is everything alright?" She- "She" should not be capitalized. After dialogue, pro-nouns are not supposed to be capitalized. Definitely not a big deal, it doesn't bother me at all! I still thought this was a wonderful first chapter! :D

~Rosie

Author's Response: Thank you for the swap your fic was wonderful :)

I never of Ollie family either until I wrote this but this story is on haitus until the summer when I can edit this story. I feel like I didn't portray Ollie correctly.


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