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Review:Ravenclaw_Charm says:
A fabulous chapter yet again.
I'll be honest: I thought I was going to kill myself after reading 3000+ worded chapter. But I just want to read more! Your writing is just so amusing and I laughed so much! :D I love how you characterized Lily. She's like her mother but a funnier - perhaps cooler? - version of her. (I don't like Ginny very much :P)
I enjoyed how all the Next-Gen kids were scattered through different Houses. Quite frankly, I'm getting tired of hearing about Gryffindors as main characters -.- Just make sure their personalities fit their House! (I think they do so far, so that's good :D)
I love Hattie and the way she and Lily became friends. I'd definitely be Hattie in that situation, haha ;) I also love "The Fake Weasley" - haha :)
I also enjoyed how you characterized the Potters. I think you kept them to cannon while making them quite humorous. (Harry kissing his daughter on her forehead to embarass her - classic!) The way Lily feels about her extended family was great to read, too. It was a new and interesting take on the Wotters. Also, the memorial! Can't wait to see what that is like!
Can't wait to read more! This story is just SO good! :D

Author's Response: Eeeep, thank you so much. You're honestly way too sweet. I try not to make my chapters too long, but Lily likes to talk :P She's a bit crazy, but don't tell her that. I do want Lily to embody some of Ginny's characteristics-her strength, but also her tendency to be overly dramatic. I'm glad you prefer her to Ginny though :P

Oh, I know. Not every NextGen can be a Gryffindor! I have my own little head canons for all of them, of course, but Lily has always been a 'Claw to me.

Yeah, I wanted the friendships to seem real. People do have nicknames and strange friendship stories. And gosh, that's like the biggest compliment ever. I fail at canon characters, really I do.

You're way way too sweet. Thank you so much!

-Naida

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