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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
I have a couple of things to say,but first...AH!! OMG! OMG! They kiss! YES! FINALLY! OMG! YAY! YAYAY! I am the happiest reviewer on earth right now! OMG! I can't even breath properly! Ahhh!! omg. they kiss! yes! yes!

Oh the joys cheering for the first slash couple I root for...omg. I am just so so so happy. :D I cannot contain it! Hahaha.

*ahem* Okay, so back to my professional reviewer side. I'd like to say first, so sorry for the delay of the review. I was being the biggest slacker in the world these last couple of days and yeah...kinda forgot about my reviews.

Secondly, I know this is not a end of the story but I want to thank you so much for bringing this story to my attention. I never read slash stories unless people request it on my review thread, not because I have anything against gays or whatever, but because sometimes authors write them in ways that I don't think is the right way...so I rarely read them. I think this one is the best I've ever read, and if my goldfish-brain-like-mind works properly I think this is either my 3rd our 4th slash story that I have read.

This story is lovely and true-to-the-facts we all know that life isn't exactly that easy for people like Albus and Scorpius ,and your story gives us that. Some stories write them as you know 'Everything is fine and nothing is going to happen if we come out of the closet' type, but something is going to happen and not everyone will respect your decision and often authors don't really realise that for some reason I don't know. (See this is why I rarely read slash stories.)

But yeah, your story always kinda gave us that anxiety feeling that Albus feels every time I read a chapter. I love the way you write, its like magic or something (its magic!) Your characterise Albus and Scorpius so well...I can't even describe it. The way you pin-point Albus' concerns every chapter is just fantastic! I love the way you keep us on edge about what's going to happen next.

This chapter did not disappoint, if anything it made my week. I have been waiting for this moment, and though I was quite surprised that you brought this on quite early from my expectations I can't say that I don't like it. Albus is very concerned about what will happen if him and Scorpius display their relationship publicly. Though, I very much adore Scorpius for putting up so much courage and not giving a freak (so close to typing a ver un-PG language there!) about what people will think. But I side Albus on this one, maybe they need to lie low for a bit at first...and you know, kinda figure out what they should do. Ooh! Can we please see Scorpius' take on this? I really want to see how much anxiety and worry he's going through, and I have a small feeling that he's not caring much about it as much as Albus is.

Oh dear...this is quite a lengthy review, isn't it?! Got too carried away by the moment, I guess! I'm so sorry! 10/10

Won't make it any longer! ;)
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Thank you! What can I say, I'm overwhelmed and giddy by your review! I have never got this kind of praise for a story ever! :-D You've made my day and my entire week by this...!

I guess I'll keep re-requesting, and hope that I won't disappoint you in my future chapters... I've got at least ten more chapters left.

This fic is like my baby, so when someone like it it makes me very proud. Or Albus is my baby, really. (Or maybe he is me? Appart from the apparent differences between us; like that I'm not a gay teenage boy but a straight married woman with children... But he is me, anyway, in some aspects. Strange...)

I think Scorpius is cool, but he isn't my baby like Albus is. I hadn't planned on writing anything from Scorpius's POV, but maybe it would be a good spin off? It seems like I can't let go of this fic, I keep writing, adding and editing forever.

Thank you once again! You're the best! :-)

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