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Review:Bluestreakspirit says:
Hi :) I wanted to say that I absolutely ADORE this story, and Game. I decided to wait until I finished all of what was there before I reviewed, but this all goes toward Game, too!

I loved the big fight between Rona and Oliver in Game. I thought it was absolutely fantastic that you didn't go for the clichè situation of he-really-didn't-like-me-at-all and instead went with woah-he-actually-liked-me-TOO-much. It was completely fantastic and my respect for you as a writer and your creativity just went through the roof. The way you played that out was just... mm. I have no words. It was perfect and I loved it.

From Game and Play, I love the length of these chapters. Oliver's perspective is probably my favorite - Rona and the skirts made me smile. Jeremy and Rona being (step) brother and sister is great x 47292173602! This whole household is gonna have a great summer, especially because they're all at Puddlemere :)

I hate to sound like one of THOSE people, but I would really love it if you wrote some cuddly/snogging/talking/fluffy scenes with Rona and Oliver. I'm kind of curious to see how they really act around each other now that they work for THE SAME TEAM (gasp!) and now that they've been together for a while. Are they still totally banterful? Is Rona a bit snarky? Is Ollie totally whipped? (Pssht, I know the answer to that one already... Duh, yes.)

Thanks for two F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C stories that I know I'll be rereading for days :)
-Cat

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

Ahh, i remember that fight well, because when I wrote it, I recall wanting to make sure that it was something that was partly Rona's fault, because relationship problems are almost always double-sided. I always see this 'someone has to win the other person back' sort of thing, and I didn't like the idea of that. I really love that you pointed this out :3

Hee, I adore writing Oliver. he's just too sweet.

OH DEFINITELY LOTS OF CUDDLY/LONG TERM RELATIONSHIP SCENES. I just haven't been able to get to them yet. Admittedly, I'm lazy with Play, just because I have plot-intensive stories elsewhere, and I really just want to write these cuddly scenes here. I don't even want to write Puddlemere (but I thought it'd be bad if I didn't write a little bit of it). BUT YES, when I write more, it will be mostly of this floofy cuddly things. I just... have to get to it xD

Thank you so so much :3 You've sparked an old muse!


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