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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Here from the review swap!

So first of all it looks like you have a pretty unique idea. Most next gen's I've read kind of blend together in my head because they're pretty much the same story, but this is definetely unique.

There was a good introduction to Lily's character, and we got a good look at her ambition and determination, as wll as insights into how she got onto her path. I wonder if the scandal is as big as she's making it out to be, or if she's just a bit over dramatic? I would have liked to see a little more information, maybe a couple hints as to what the scandal is, but I'm sure this will be revealed in time.

Overall it looks like you're off to a really good start.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for swapping :D

I freak out whenever someone says my idea is unique :P I'm so so glad. One of the reasons I don't read a lot of Next Gen is exactly what you said. They all blur together with the same plot and same ships and same characters.

Ohhh, she's very over dramatic ;) I'm hoping to reveal that later, so you can have a better idea of the size of the scandal. She's a bit paranoid as well, so that's why it seems a lot larger to her. I can definitely see how a little more information could be put in. Personally, I like to have a complete sense of mystery in the first chapter and then begin to drop hints as we go along. But yeah, I do see your point :)

Thank you so much!

-Naida


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