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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there! Again, apologies for the late reviews...argh, I have a problem with being a good reviewer and often slacks off. I'm so sorry, I seriously have no idea where my life is going right now so yeah.

I seriously have no idea how you manage to get a hold on so many character and still have a great control over the story. You deserve a big round of applause for that!

Aw! Why can't we see more of Henry? He seems like the most perfect boyfriend in town! I really love the way Nyx is head-over-heels for him and he cares about her a lot and...and they are just such a good couple! :D When you break them up...I will be on a rage. My sanity level will go down (if it can go any lower than this.xD)

I love James/Lily, said it too many times already, because they are just so adorable, like Henry and Nyx are. I like the way you give them at least some focus once in a while though you really don't have to. Your characterisation of James is so spot on! Anything Lily-related will certainly get his attention anytime of the day. :P

Overall, a great chapter though I thought of it as a 'filler', but it was still great! No dull moment in this story of yours, nope. Not one.

Yay for you being such an awesome author!
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hey! Don't worry about it. Sorry for the late reply! And I totally get that. School started back today and I just want to cry, I forgot how much I disliked it. Eighteen months until it's over though (not that I'm counting..) and I can't wait to spend the time writing. ^_^

Anyway! Enough of my rambling. :P

Haha, thanks. I have more characters to come (quite a few actually, although they aren't for a while, thank goodness) and I'm really happy that you think I have a good handle on the characters though. That means a lot coming from an experienced reviewer like you. :)

Henry will be back next chapter, with more of a focus, along with Sirius and the other Marauders, along with Alice and Frank and Rae and Anthony. (Phew, only now do I realise how much I still have to write! Stupid broken laptop D:)

Don't go on a rage! Haha, hopefully you'll like the way I go about writing their relationship (and don't hate me afterwards!)

James and Lily are my OTP (after Sirius and Keira :P) and I have some major plunnies for them when I'm done with this story. I couldn't not write about them, I love them so much, and I'm glad that you feel I'm doing them justice! ^_^

Yeah, it's a filler, but it starts to set things up for later, so it was certainly necessary. I'm gad you liked it all the same though, haha.

Thanks so much for the feedback, and yay for being such an awesome reviewer!
- Adele :) xx


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