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Review:Alopex says:
Ooops. Guess that chocolate wasn't such a good idea after all! While I am pleased that Moody and Duncan managed to waltz out of the compound without any fuss, I certainly don't think they are out of the woods yet. After all, it appears they are going to have to hide out in that safe house for a while week, and I have the feeling that it's going to turn into a not-so-safe house with Anastasia on the hunt. I'm fairly convinced that she will be looking for the intruders.

There is something I am wondering about. Moody and Duncan have been instructed to monitor messages, since they have a Kwikcodes machine now. However, seeing as the theft has already been discovered, does it not seem likely that some extra security measures might be put in place for passing messages? Obviously just changing the encryption would not be enough, and if it is their primary means of communication, they may not be prepared to make a quick change, but if I was Anastasia and her superiors, I'd be looking at alternatives.

How typical of Tom Riddle to consider killing the waiter rather than paying the bill! It took you less than a sentence to convey what a twisted individual he is. Anyway, he's maneuvered himself nicely into the position where he wants to be, and I'm curious to see how his unofficial mission develops.

This is an interesting story so far, and I hope you continue writing it. :)

Author's Response: As you probably guessed, they weren't going to get away that easily!

You brought up an excellent point about the communications. Without giving too much away, that is something that will definitely come into play in the next chapter.

I have to admit that writing this serious version of Riddle is so much harder and less amusing than my humorous AU Voldemort from my other stories, but I'm really glad to hear that his twistedness is coming accross.

Thank you so much for reviewing, and hopefully I should get the next chapter ready soon!

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