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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I'm here finally! I've been seriously slacking on my favorites but I'm slowly getting all caught up. Just need to take a second-- this is my 350th review (: yay milestones!

Anyway, an actual review!

So the memorial is broken! I can't really say I didn't see it coming (obviously :p) but I liked how you brought it in as the first sentence of the chapter. It just hit home for the reader in a great way. I loved Lily through the 'finding out'-- you had her grimacing at the prophet as she read it-- every time through the chapter the prophet was mentioned I liked how you had it in italics as if she was truly annoyed by it merely existing. I also liked how you had her character react to the situation. Instead of freaking out, she was sort of numb to the things going on around her. It clearly hit close to home for her being the kid of Harry Potter, and her 'realization' was very well written.

And hey, if it involved talking to extremely fit Quidditch blokes with their shirts off? That was just a bonus. -- I loved this line. Loved it. Just another reason I wish Hogwarts was real-- Quidditch boys ;)

I loved all of her excitement getting to do her 'first interview'! I'm wondering if you'll have her end up printing the article even if the whole school doesn't believe it. She seems like she is really caught in the middle here (which is expected if she's just finding out from Lysander now) so I'm wondering if/how her feelings will be swayed.

Fantastic work! This chapter was a great introduction to the plot, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress from here.

Author's Response: YAAAY YOU'RE HERE :D You don't even know how much your reviews mean to me ♥ I look forward to every one of them :P And yay for the 350th review! :D Makes me feel special.

Haha, I'm so glad you liked that. The format of this is one of my favorite parts, just because I can introuduce everything so quickly. The Prophet being in italics is actually canon-that's how it's written in the books-but hey, it can have two purposes :D I feel like if she wants to be a journalist, she can't freak out about anything. She has to be calm and professional, y'know? :P I actually didn't even think of it being Harry's trait, but you're totally rght. YAY.

Ohh, I couldn't not mention Quidditch boys. It's just part of Hogwarts ;)

And that is coming up in the next chapter which is ALREADY WRITTEN :D I'm so proud of myself :P It'll be out in about a week. Yeah, she is caught in the middle a bit. Lorcan will definitely start to sway her ;)

Thank you so much for this review! I look forward to your reviews for every chapter. They keep me writing ;)

-Naida


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