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Review:Flavia says:
Oooh...good cliffy! The action's about to begin and I'm getting excited lol!

I liked the bit where Neville was reflecting about his past with Hannah and her finding out about her mother's death. One thing that didn't sit right with me though, was you seemed to imply that McGonagall told her mother was dead in the greenhouse in front of the class. I realise you wanted Neville to see her reaction but I doubt McGonagall would ever be that insensitive to do it in front of a bunch of sixth years that way. Just my opinion.

I adored your description of the sky when Neville stepped out a the top of the tower...absolutely gorgeous imagery, you have a real knack for painting a picture with your words which is wonderful because so many people have a tendency to overdo the dialogue and forget to describe things...but not you :)

Great work, keep it up :)

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