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Review:Siriusly3 says:
Oh this is so sweet, it sucks that they fell out, and there's not much slash yet..but I love it anyway. One thing, I think that when you talk about drugs you should make up some magical ones because them using muggle ones seems unbelieveable. I love where this is going, can;t wait for next chapter! We gonna see some more Marlene?!

Author's Response: I nkow about that part with the drugs, thought of it myself but was too lazy to go back and edit it, because I'd have to explain it in a way that would feel connectable to teh actual drugs we use in the real world... and was too busy to do that because of all the squeezing my brains for the plot... :D I usually edit things like that in the end. Thanks for pointing it out though, its always better to know the little things that jump out of 'character' for the story.
Yeah, of course we're going to see more of Marlene, but its going to be mostly through flashbacks and Lily's reminiscence of her friend as she realizes the depth of her feelings.
Thank you for accepting this story for your challenge and i hope you find it worth the efford :D

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