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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Hi there!

Omigosh we met Malea! 8O I love how she was different to Molly, because she was a Slytherin and more calculating, but she was very similar too. Their mannerisms were just close enough to be reminiscient of one another, and I love how you showed her obssession with Rodolphus and all of her family in just one short scene! The third-person-POV also seemed to work better for her, somehow; her slightly cold manner made it much more fitting to have a little distance.

And the flickers of Molly getting into Malea's head - they were wonderful! I love how they're being a little introduced already, and Molly's reaction to them too. It seems so dreamlike at the moment, but I can't wait to see how they're progressed.

I'm so intrigued by the little incident with French Boy and Bad Girl at the end! It seems like it was Molly who heard them, but I'm not sure if some Malea slipped in there too - and I feel like it might be Louis, since he's French and all, but that's sort of a red herring too since he's obvious, but is /that/ a red herring too? And I really like Louis D:

Eep, off to read the next chapter! 10/10!

Author's Response: Haha, I love your enthusiasm! :D It's so wonderful! Yeah, they are kinda similar, aren't they? It was completely unintentional - mostly - since when I planned it, I didn't want it to be like they were mirrors of each other or incarnations or anything like that. They're entirely separate people. Thrid person... yeah, it does suit her a little more, I guess (honestly, I never thought of it like that before), but I mostly chose it for contrast :P

Thank you! :D Ah, yes... I'm not quite sure what to say here, since I don't want to give anything away... er... they're significant? :P

Haha, French Boy and Bad Girl! I like those nicknames... ah, they're brilliant! I may start using them myself, lol. Ooh, nice guess! I can't say anything (that seems to be recurring theme in this response... sorry!) but it is a nice guess :P And I like Louis too - he's so adorable in a very unadorable way, if you know what I mean.

Thank you for this really lovely review! :hug:
Aph xx

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