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Review:x0xShattered_Dreamsx0x says:
Again, I have to comment on the length and easiness to read. Quite a few times I find myself reading - or even writing- lengthy chapters with long, imposing paragraphs but this is great. You give just enough without giving too much and I envy you that.

On to the story. I liked the beginning and the peek into Dimitri's life. I imagine Zack and Sophia are his coven? Or nest? Or whatever you may call a group of vampires that live together? Or not exactly as I did read Zack call Dimitri 'son'. I suspect all will be cleared up in later chapters. I like the tormented characterization of Dimitri. It's like he's torn between two things - his duty and responsibility to his family and this whatever it is that is going with him and Hugo.

I also love, just like in the last chapter, the interaction between Hugo and Teddy. I think this is great and adds depth to their relationship now that they have this wolf thing in common. Great story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next!

~SD~

Author's Response: Coven, maybe, they say family - Zack, Sophia and Theo... Because, Zack says 'son'.

Thank you for the lovely review. :)

Sam.


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